Redo on the first assignment
10mo
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John Wonch
The first submission was pretty bad, so I redid it by hand instead in an art program
10mo
Hey John,
All of your values are a little light, and you need more half tone values to transition from shadow to light.
I did a quick sketch to show you what I mean :)