Please can anyone critique
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Anubhav Saini
Hello everyone the goal with these were to emphasize squash and stretch and to push the gesture
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Tiago Marques
Great work!! I think you´re in the right path!
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Steve Lenze
Hey Anubhav, This is a good idea, the flower sack is a good way to practice gesture and getting across emotion in a pose. I think you would benefit from giving you sack a little more dimension, it feels a little flat. I did a quick sketch to show you how you can add a seam in the sack along with the center line to help give it a more solid feel. Hope it helps :)
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@hunt4animation
Hello Anubhav, Thank you for sharing your exercises and requesting a critique! There are several pages so it difficult to name a specific thing but may help in speaking more in general. I find the flour sacs are difficult at times because I think I am drawing the same thing over again when I intend to have variations. To help with this it might be helpful to do a specific emotion and label the drawing or do a series emphasizing the movement. Some things that could help with these drawings would be to emphasize the volume and weight more. The practice of the flour sac is to keep the same size sac but have it change to the movement being portrayed.
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