Pretty good. The perspective is warped but I don’t know if the is intentional. Try doing reference studies.

Seems to me like you've memorized or copied contour lines without understanding the 3D volumes they represent, so I would focus on adding a bit of structure (building blocks in perspective) to your drawings. Right now, your characters behave more like fluids than solids, which honestly can be something to lean into if you want. Depends on how you want to develop your style. Having gooey characters and less structure can work for highly detailed psychedelic art, for instance. Also, I feel like you've got some good intuition for perspective but it needs to be polished.

One thing I notice in your drawings is that you already have good lines, so next I would recommend practicing basic forms and structure and how to incorporate it in your drawings.