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3yr
Justin Phelps
I'm not quite certain if this belongs here or in Art lounge chat but I would like to take a step forward by putting out my own personal work outside of practice ( well I think I consider this more of a practice piece since I just wanted to see where I am and what I can do so far.) I'll be back to to grinding out more lessons tonight though since I know generally where I'm at now. Thank y'all for being patient with me.
3yr
Hey Justin,
Cool idea. I have a few suggestions that I hope will help your design. As you can see in my draw over, I think you should add some more gesture to your drawings to keep them from being stiff. I hope this helps, keep drawing :)
Justin Phelps
3yr
Thank you for your help Steve. I will definitely incorporate more gesture into the next piece and your draw over is also a big help. I'm not quite sure how to respond, this is pretty much my first time posting something I did to for any sort of critique so I was really unsure that I'd get a response. I'm definitely motivated though to do more artwork so I really appreciate this.
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3yr
Oh gosh I completely forgot to open this to critique, I'm sorry y'all. If I'm posting anything I always want to make it available to review.
