Minimalist painting - critique request
3yr
Hank Macleod
I wanted to create a minimalist, graphic version of this ristra as part of a commissioned illustration to promote a New Mexico organization on social media. I generally don't do this style of art, but I would like to do more of it. I want to know if the idea could be communicated better, if it could be simplified, and above all, how to make it more striking to the eye. Thank you!
3yr
Hi! I like the way you are moving. I think as it is it's good for a background prop, but I'd add a third more darker tone to define the form of individual parts better. Right now it looks more like a unified object to me (In my opinion). Hope it helps)
Hank Macleod
3yr
That is helpful, thank you!
