Manga Feedback
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Wesley
I’m working on a manga and I would appreciate any feedback
I am also creating some species and the ones I have are fish people lizard people and bird people. I also added dragons.
Hey Wesley,
you have some good ideas, but your figures are lacking dimension and gesture. I did a quick sketch to show you how you can improve gesture, especially in your profiles. I hope this helps :)
Thanks I can see what you mean but also I intentionally am not having eyebrows for my style and I’m having the eyes themselves behave as the eye eyebrows if you know what I mean, but I will try The overlapping. So thanks.