Looking for feedback on posing and proportions for my initial sketch
5mo
TeusFlips
I have this upcoming RPG campaign and I really want to draw out my OC for the campaign. The character is from the Pokémon games so I have Ken Sugimori Characters (the three completed illustrated pieces) as reference, and the character is a camera person so I found a pose I like.
I am struggling to illustrate the feet as "on toes" from this angle so any feedback would be great. I also have no idea how to approach the shorts either, essentially line placement feedback would be great. I think my proportioning is good, but if anyone sees anything I need to increase or decrease in size and is willing to give me a heads-up, I would be grateful!
5mo
Update on the drawing, I think I've made some progress but I would still appreciate any feed back :)
Steve Lenze
5mo
Because your drawing lacks details like seams and wrinkles, it really flattens it out. Try to do a rough sketch working out all the perspective so you know where to use wrinkles to give clues about how the body is tilting. I did a quick sketch to show you what I mean, I hope it helps :)
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