Looking for critiques and advice on timed drawings
3yr
@beagle
I drew along with some 3-10 minute poses from this video https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nZ1-bK-tDHM I would love some feedback on things that I should focus on improving. I know that there is a lot to work on, but any advice is greatly appreciated :)
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Mike O'Sullivan
My biggest critique is that your lines seem stiff, and that's carrying into your poses. Try and loosen up, remember the pose doesn't have to be perfect, just capture that action! Your figures are reading as solid though, which is a big plus. I just rewatched the Proko gesture videos, and they're a huge help!
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@beagle
Thanks for the feedback!
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Vincentius Sesarius
It's actually a great study! However, once you've done your study, I will advice you to pick one pose that you like the most, and finalize them to a complete finished artwork. Because so many times I see people only do studies, while missing all the great details the pose offers as a whole. Gesture and all that is great, but you still need to be able to make them into a finished piece in the end.
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@beagle
Good idea! There is definitely a lot to learn from a longer study, and if I already got the model's gesture why not use it :)
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