Looking for critique. Journey to the center of the earth
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Juan Pedro Ramos Ponce
Hi, following with the idea of the book cover prokochallenge here is my version of an iconic scene from "Journey to the center of the earth" by Jules Verne. Any criticism or feedback will be welcome.
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Alexey Skliar
Hi juan . I think as an illustration it looks preaty good. I agree with previous guys about composition and separation but its minor things overall the picture looks solid.
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Juan Pedro Ramos Ponce
Thank you.
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Atharva Lotake
@Juan Pedro Ramos Ponce Here's What I have to say about your piece. I hope it was helpful. Btw, Loved your piece! Great job! PS Next time you ask for critique just check the ' Post as Help Request' box so I can directly comment on it. Anyways have a good day!
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Juan Pedro Ramos Ponce
Thanks for the comments and for the paint over.
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Juan Pedro Ramos Ponce
Thank you so much for taking the time to do a paint over. 
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Christopher Beaven
I really like it. The only improvement I can see is to add a block to the viewers eye at the bottom right. Maybe a tail of one of the monsters curving around and under the boat. This would keep the viewer in the picture plane more. I like how the people and the mast of the ship are pointing to the action. You have a good overall shape to your composition. If you look at the book I pulled off line thanks to google you will see a definite figure 8 composition. This composition does a great job of keeping the eye into the action all over the image. Hope that helps! Great work!
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Juan Pedro Ramos Ponce
I see what you mean, thank you very much.
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