I need some feedback
2yr
Sofia Centurion
Hi people! , Is the first time that I am posting a question here, and before start, thank you all for your time!
This is an anatomy study that I did some days ago, a longer pose that i am used to (4 hours) from a photograph on a 50x35cm paper.
I was wondering if I could have some background from you on the anatomy study itself, the structure and if it make sense, if something looks off or any tip that you could give me to keep improving!
2yr
Hello! This is great work. Just wondering if that boob is acting a bit strange. Might be good to do a page of boobs to try and get the gravity right on them? Good luck!
Sofia Centurion
2yr
Thank you Gaby, probably you are right,
2yr
Hey Sofia,
I like your drawing, it has great gesture. there were some issues with proportion, so I did a quick sketch of what I think would help. Also, as far as your rendering, you are lacking contrast. The eyes are attracted to the area of greatest contrast, or you will fail to direct the viewer. There is more to say about the rendering but you asked specifically about the anatomy. I hope this helps :)
2yr
Thank you!, yes i didn't ask about the rendering because i had to low the contrast in the editing as the light coming from the left side messed up the photograph !! Anyways i finded really helpfull the other tips.
