Hello, a couple of weeks ago I made a comic, this is a semi continuation of that comic, I tried making the images more clear according to the feedback I got from the previous post and I would like to know if it works or not. Beside character references, I don't have much artistic reference of what I was going for, I was looking at local Misogynist Dave SIm's Cerebus and I was reading Eichiro Oda one piece, but I was more reading them to match their quality than any sort of any specific technique or mark making. I think I was also looking Takehiko Inoue's Vagabond, Sargent's watercolor, Sorolla's oil painting, Jon J muth's dracula, Zbukvich's painting and Andrew Wyeth's watercolor. But I'm not sure if I can pinpoint what I was trying to get from them, I more did what felt right than to any sort of copying to the artist mention. So I guess I would just like to have any critism on what feels wrong or if anything isn't up to standard. (Though I would point to James Joyce and Cormac Mccarthy for the writting department, but since this is a drawing website, let's ignore this ;^;) Anyway, thanks for reading and the feedback, hope this one is better than before :D