I haven't been drawing/painting much since I got burn out but I these 2 things.I did the first for an illustration for a fanfic.The second is a cover illustration of NAtsuo Kirino's book,Real World,that I would like to submit to the contest that's running now.I would like to know if any of the part in these works are boring/not clear.I would also love if anyone could tell me if any part of the work isn't working.(I've also attached a bucnh of reference I used for the first drawing,so I would also love if anyone could tell me if the character are on model or not) Also as always, @Christopher Beaven any thoughts?