I made a bunch of variation of this painting,the first painting dissatisfied me,so I photo it and put it into clip studio paint and see if I could push the vignette further,but found that it could not be salvaged.So I moved on and tried to redo it.The third painting I finsihed today,but found that while technically fine,I found I was not comfortable with the slight upbeat tone as much as the the more subdue and quite tone.(That and I think the color harmony isn't as good as the first now that I look at it) Anyway,Though looking back,I realise it isn't as bad,I'm still kinda disatisfied.So I'm looking for some thought on how to improve it.Specifically I feel my composition and value isn't as good as I can do.So I hope I could get critique on that.( I also attach my preliminary sketch and close up if that helps)Also on the first one,I was trying to get the feeling of autumn and the changing of the seasons.Would love some feedback if that feeling is there or not Thanks for replying :D