General feedback on flow and how it reads.
Palmer Vaughn
Creating a series of comic based on conversations I overhear in public.
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flow is fine. middle panel is confusing in both subject and perspective. bottom middle skips the axis (not sure if that's important in comics, but it's quite jarring.) also bottom middle, the characters have switched positions and in the next panel they're switched back. I'd be happy to give more info if needed. Nice work otherwise. I enjoy the multiple angles.
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