First Robo-Beans
2yr
@c_moon
I finally got into doing the Robo-Beans for the first time after remembering it after a week, the gesture drawings don't have any time limit as I didn't know how much time I'd spent drawing the Bean along with building the Robo-Bean from it in each pose. Critique is as always, greatly appreciated.
2yr
Hey c_moon,
your drawings have pretty good gesture to them, so try to keep that going forward. I took a couple of your drawings and did a sketch over them to show you what you should be thinking of while doing these.
One of the most important things is to make sure the torso and pelvis relate to each other properly. The distance between them, how they tilt in relation to each other and so forth. Also, all your figures are too short, so think about proportion as well. I hope this helps :)
@c_moon
2yr
Thanks for the critique. I have a question but how do you practice proportion? I've always struggled getting this part right.
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2yr
Oh hey it's you
Hey,you fix the leg!Your proportion is definetly more consistent now.You captured most of the gesture pretty well and you made the "boxes" facing the right way.Though I think some of these could be improve a little,particulary the bottom on no 3,the right leg I feel could be twisted a little bit more and I think you could improve the pose if your turn the head to the right ( here's an overpainting if that helps)
But other than that not much else (atleast from my observation)Anyway,pretty good.Please keep going,you're doing great :D
