You're in the right place, David! You can also post in the assignments tab on the course itself :) Great work with the shape of the pear, and identifying the shapes of the values here, I would just say to take notice of the light halftone portion that's in the midst of the shadow, and lighten that up, along with darkening both of your shadow values, since the lighter shadow is very close to your darkest halftone. That will give more clarity to your drawing overall. :) Good job!