Drawing Fantasy Female figure - critique requested
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chekdot
I went through the fantasy female figure course and learned a lot from it. I started focusing on fantasy female figure. After going through all the courses, I can definitely see improvement overall, but I still don't see this on the same level as Patrick. I understand it takes a lot of practice and time to achieve that kind of mastery. However, I would still love some feedback on this on how I can get closer to the results like Patrick achieves. Thank you very much in advance!
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Steve Lenze
Hey chekdot, These are pretty nice, especially the gesture, they have nice flow. In your first figure you are having some proportion issues, and you need to think about how gravity will effect the forms. The second figure is feeling odd because the left arm is saying we are looking down at the figure, but the figure is looking straight on. I did some quick sketches and some notes so you can see what I mean, I hope it helps :)
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chekdot
Thank you Steve. How could I make the spine/center line less flat?
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