Critiques on anatomy studies
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@torink
Hey everyone. I have been working on these studies and would like some feedback. thanks!
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@johnhiggins
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Samuel Eli
My immediate reaction to seeing these; cool rendering! Did you use a reference, like a photo or proko's vids, or are they imagined? The jaw construction on the lip study seems a little "elongated" vertically. I think this would work in caricature, but sense I don't have much else to reference in the construction (i.e. I don't have a nose, eyes, or face shape to see how they are pushed in relationship to the lips), it just feels like lips that are stretched in a vacuum. The vertical narrowness of the perceived mandible shows this too, I would maybe push that out a bit. The eye ball itself has a good sense of rounded form. However, the iris and pupil don't seem to map onto the rounded surface exactly, in perspective. Maybe work on circles, ellipses, and stability of the stroke of the circle? I guess this would depend on where the person is looking. One big thing about the eye study though, is that I think you've got some anatomical features in reverse, or didn't include eye lashes on one side of the eye. The inner part of the tear duct usually is on the opposite side of the where the most noticeable eye lashes fan out. The nose stands out to me. It feels like the bulb at the tip of the nose is actually turning to the figures left side, and down, rather than being exactly in the middle. It also feels a little elongated. Again, don't know if it's the reference, but it feels like the position of the nose isn't lining up with the ghosted figures head in deep space. I want to think that it should be turned more inward, and upward, so that we are mostly seeing underneath the nose in a more triangular fashion.
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