CRITICISE LIKE YOU WERE SOCRATES V2!
1yr
@bark
Thank you Steve, Bernard and Draft for all your feedback.
It's been helpful!
Now there's actually a reference for you to look at.
What can be improved?
Thank you!
1yr
Wow, what a huge improvement!
I think your proportions and placement of the facial features look good, and the over all expression seems nice.
To improve, you need to make sure you are accurately copying the shapes and angles you see. I did a diagram to show you what I mean, I hope it helps. Keep up the good work :)
@draft_al
11mo
Bark congratulations!!! I definitely second What Steve says. You gave it much more space for the features compared to the previous one. If I can give you any feedback on this version, it would be bein careful with the eyes. The yes are too close to each other on this version. The rule of thumb is that the eyes are the equivalent length of an eye between them. One way it can help you is looking at the edges of the wings of the nose, you can use a plum line to place the tear ducts, and the can help with having the proper distance from the front view. Great job.
1yr
Bark, I'd suggest to avoid copying all details, and in stead dedicating your energy in getting the exact proportions of the main landmarks, like the eyes together, and the eyes versus the cheeks. About the shadows - choose the ones that support a clear view on the face, leading the viewer to his gaze in stead of those that only distract the viewer. You can do it, since you have already proven to create convincing shadows.
