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Hi there, I need some feedback for these paintings, Thanks
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Some more nice work from you, and I continue to see improvement!
One thing I'm noticing in both pieces is some hue shifts in the lights that don't seem to align with any light source. Overall, it makes it unclear to me as the viewer what the lighting situation is. Can you describe the lighting situation you were going for?
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Thank you Tim for your time and give me feedback, again. Its good, when you see inprovement.
I'm supriced, that you find the lighting confusing.
At first we have the skylight as a soft blue tone, the sunlight as the brightest light and finally a warm frontlight. I have to add, that I'm using screenshots as references and that is, how the lighting were. Would it be better to make a stronger difference between the light sources or use maximum two light sources? Maybe I had be more precised with the background lighting?
I always appreciate your advice, thanks.
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Hey Thomas,
I like your portraits, They are well drawn and the lighting is nice. I wanted to give you some feedback that I hope you find helpful. I did a draw/paint over to show you some things I noticed, but know that these are small things. Mostly my comments are about edges, especially between values, and some drawing issues. Over all these are pretty nice., good job :)
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Hi Steven, thanks for your feedback. Its great to get notify where you can improve. I appreciate it.
