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@touhoufan_008
Hello, I’m a Touhou artist wanting to improve, so I joined Proko! Please give critique for this! ^^
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Steve Lenze
Hey touhoufan_008, I like your drawing, it's very sweet, and nicely colored. One of the thing we can do to make sure our drawing is correct, is to do a structural drawing. I did a quick one over your figure, and you will notice that there are some things that need addressing. Doing this will assure that our drawing is accurate before we spend a lot of time rendering and coloring it. I hope this helps :)
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oh hey it's you Welcome to the proko community @touhoufan_008  !I hope you have a nice stay here :D Anyway for the painting,this is pretty good!I think you got the structure of the figure pretty well and I quite like the shape design on the hair :D. The biggest problem I see with this painting is the hand.The thumb and finger I found too long and felt like they lack structure.For example here's a drawing by the great Ramon Nunez,observe the location of the knuckle of the fingers and where it is facing.Though the proportion is a bit exagarated you can still see a sense of structure with the hand and the subtle foreshortening of the fingers going inward. Here's another example,observe these drawing by the great disney animator Milt Kahl,particulary the one where he shows the thumb.See the shape of it and observe how stubby and small it is compare to the fingers-Please also see the shape of the end of the thumb and how it is in a long oval shape-I suggest you copy and study these hands or other master you admired.(I would also recommend this video by MArco Bucci to get a better understanding of hands and it's structure https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XBMQ-H-qUVk) I also did an overpainting on what my personal solution would be.(I also changed the neck slightly to better fit the head.) But anyway,other than that,it's pretty good!Please keep going,I would love to see your improvement :D .(Also after you study hand I recommend watching this video to get a better of composition,as I feel this too could be improve https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TOYkXEGkXx0&t=3677s)
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