Another critique please.
7mo
@stevenmc
I've went back to just proportions as advised by you guys (thank you) and it's really helped. I fixed several little and big things and it seems to have clicked a lot more. These seem very much more correct to the reference pictures (busts)
My own critiques are the angles are sometimes off by a little bit causing the eye to be in the wrong place compared to the reference but using the Anatomy knowledge I'm able to put in that bit imagine to be there.
I think the eyes are looking a lot more like eyes rather than just almonds. But still need work to give them the 3d pop but that may be when I start shading properly. Right now I'm working on the Anatomy of things proportions and thinking about the placement in comparison too other parts. If I did critique the eyes I would say they are maybe too big.
Also going back and watching the videos over and over.
P.s please let me know if I'm posting too much. I'm trying to draw every day and if there is a limit that I may be annoying people with the amount of posts.
7mo
You should post as much as possible, that's how you learn.
As far as your drawings, the proportions are pretty good, but I agree, your eyes are a little big. The thing I think you are lacking in these is some structure to the heads. I did some examples to show you what I mean, even though I haven't seen the reference, I hope it helps :)
@stevenmc
7mo
Thank you. I'll continue to post gor feedback. I appreciate that.
On the woman with no face, I see it now that you've pointed it out too me. Thank you. The problem I faced with that was that she was a slim in the face woman but then had a double chin type thing going on.
One thing I haven't figured out yet is how to take a photo on my photos and the reference photo so I can check my proportions with some sort of overlay stuff. Is it possible on the phone? Or do I sent it too my pc and have to do it that way?
I also see it with the crooked face now aswel. Amazing how I only see it after I'm told. Thank you. Not sure why that happened. I know the reference photo his head was wider, than my drawing. I think I'll post the reference photos with future drawings.
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