Anatomy Critique: Anatomy, Composition, Rendering
2mo
John Nahashon
Hello Everyone,
I finished this drawing last month (February). I'm applying what I know about anatomy so far to figure drawing. I finished going through the anatomy course (the free version on YouTube) last year. My focus on this drawing was on anatomy, composition, and rendering. You can pick any of those areas to critique, depending on where you feel most comfortable. And if you feel like tackling all three, it's okay. Any feedback is appreciated.
And please forgive the quality of the photos. I don't have access to a good camera. I used different phone cameras hoping to get a good photo. One of the photos is sharper but missed some details; while the other one captured more details but isn't very sharp. I hope what you find missing in one photo can be discovered in the other.
In a nutshell, I will appreciate a critique about anatomy, composition, or rendering on this drawing.
Thank you in advance
John Nahashon
22d
Thank you for your feedback @krrish2006. Yes, I was also concerned about her face, but capturing her likeness wasn't my focus on this drawing. Still, I agree with you that I could have done better; she looks better in the original reference. Initially, I thought she looked okay in my drawing, but once you take a photo of your work or reflect it on a mirror, mistakes are revealed weren't so apparent. Again, thank you for taking the time to critique my work
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