A work in progress
2yr
Jo Edgehill
Hi! I'd like some feedback on this drawing I've been working on the past few days. I'd appreciate critique on anything , the background ,the anatomy,etc. Thank you for any help! :)
2yr
Hey Jo!
Overall this is a cool painting, but I have a couple of thoughts to share that might help :)
1. I think perhaps you could explore anatomy a little more, in this particular character her torso seems quite thinner than it should be. I find that remembering the rib cage is generally quite close in width to the pelvis can help with a balanced composition!
2. The purple and yellow are great colour choices as they compliment each other marvellously! The only issue with your colour choice that I can see is the purple of the shirt doesn't stand out from the purple behind it in the background. I think if you changed the purple of the background it could make your character stand out more than it currently does.
Hope this is helpful!! Good work 🙌
Jo Edgehill
2yr
This was definitely helpful! I see how the torso is a little awkward. And as for the colors ,I'll try to maybe darken the jacket? I'd love your opinion on that haha. Thanks so much for your critique!
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its an amazing drawing but i have one thing i think there might be too much purple but apart from that i think its swell
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Ohh okay , I see where you're coming from. I'll try to lessen the purple haha.Thank you so much! :)
