A redraw..
2yr
Jo Edgehill
Hello! I was recently posted a drawing (second image),and heavily took reference from a critique by @Steve Lenze on my second attempt (first image). If anyone can give me their opinion ,I'd appreciate it! Thanks! :)
(Mr. Lenze ,I hope you don't mind me tagging you!)
2yr
No problem Jo,
Your drawing is much better, good job. I did another sketch to help you a little more. You need to remember to show the perspective of the arms and legs. Use the clothing to show that the arm or leg is coming forward or away. Keep at it though, your getting there!
2yr
I think it looks better,though I think the left arm is a bit stiff.Here's my solution for it,( if you think the pose isn't what you're going for feel free to ignore this)I made 2 solution for the arm,the foreshortned bit was because I thought you were going for a punching pose,but I realise it's supposed to be holding a gun (sorry for that).So the second one is the arm moving down.(Also the shoes,but I'm guessing that's because you're in your sketch phase)
Anyway sorry if this is a bit long,but hopefully it's helpful
Jo Edgehill
2yr
It was definitely helpful!! I might try to draw the arm in the second position you drew . Hopefully it'll look less stiff. And I'll readjust the feet. Thank you so much,I appreciate it!! :)
