Thank you all very much for the help I really appreciate it and will take your advice work hard to improve. Thank you

This is pretty good for your first head studies. I’m still a beginner so I don’t know if this will help you much if it does at all but, maybe you should try to practice rotating simpler forms like boxes and practice some foreshortening it’s what helped me a bit to figure out how to rotate the head better and I hope it helps