Thanks!

That penguin drawing has a lot of style. I like how you used loose searching lines for the vr girl whilst still maintaining a smooth line quality. My only criticism is that I think you should have used lighter searching lines on the hand. What you could have done instead is lightly sketch the direction of where the lines should be pointed to, then going over it with a darker and smoother line.

Thanks! I will admit that I had issues getting those searching lines into the drawing. Too much time was spent trying to get the proportions exact.

What I do to help me with proportions is to lay out a line before drawing anything and dividing it into fourths, then laying out which parts of the drawing will be placed in the specific part of the line.

The drawings are good but you were supposed to simplify the shading into 5 values. Here you blended the values. Great job on the proportions for the portrait and the shading on the pear though!