Hi Brett, good stuff I'm inexperienced too, but thought maybe this feedback would help. For the woman in the middle row on the far left, I actually see the gesture of the torso as the opposite curve. Like her body is curving up, not hunching over. Something like what I attached here. Take a look and see what you think!

I loved this one! Knight is great and I learned a lot from hearing her perspective. So many fantastic entries to enjoy too! Thanks all around.