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Ben Whitfield
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1d
added comment inProject - Measure Proportions
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I enjoyed this lesson a lot. I am happy with my attempt but I don't have Photoshop to see how accurate I was. Any feedback is greatly appreciated.
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1d
You did a great job with this project! The angles of the facial features line up very nicely. You may have drawn the hat too small because you were getting close to the edge in your sketchbook, so watch out for that.
Ben Whitfield
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2d
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These are my level 1 attempts. Tried to not overcomplicate the shapes but that was easier said than done. Sometimes gravitated to contours without thinking. Any feedback is greatly appreciated.
Ben Whitfield
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14d
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Are rhythms the same thing as gestures? Or are rhythms expanding on gestures?
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14d
Rhythm is a gestural idea.
Gesture is the overall flow of a subject. It’s the energy that connects the parts.
Rhythms are the ripples that echo throughout.
I recommend working from the largest rhythms to the smallest ones.
When done correctly, everything in the image will be working together for the greater gesture.
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I drew the penguin and the gamer girl. I think both drawings are pretty good attempts for me but I did struggle with letting the lines flow which was the intention of the project. I find that I am very critical of every line that I draw so it makes it very challenging to let the lines I put down just flow.
Ben Whitfield
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17d
Decided to try the Level 2 Skull. Not sure my CSI's are great. Lines are a bit wobbly. Proportions are off as well.
Ben Whitfield
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17d
Second attempt after watching the demos. I did the snail following along with Stan. I attempted the boots after watching. I am not sure either is better than the first attempt, especially the boots. Those laces are tough.
Ben Whitfield
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19d
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Here are my attempts of the level 1 images. I am going thru the course for the second time now that I am caught up so and I submitting my drawings this time for feedback from the community. I really struggled with the boots especially the shoe laces. Any feedback is greatly appreciated.
they look nice! good job. I would say that for the snail the line going through the body to the head would give the impression of motion if it was more curved instead of straight. I would also encourage you to make the drawings bigger so that you can use your shoulder more, its easier to pack in more detail to larger drawings (:
Ben Whitfield
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23d
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Level 1 attempt. I did 4 thumbnails with 2 values. I found it really hard only using 2 values to make what I was doing identifiable. I will attempt some more using 3 values next time
Ben Whitfield
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1mo
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Level 1 Assignment. I first did the drawing myself and then did one while watching Stan drawing it. For the one I did myself I don't think I separated the values enough. I also used some curves when drawing the pear (I think I should have used only straights). Any feedback would be appreciated. Thanks
