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Pablo Flores
Please critique my work
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women shapes and forms
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winterpencil
These look absolutely stunning! If I had to nitpick I would say that sometimes the boxes don't seem to have a correct perspective. LIke in 8 of 10 the upper left figure has a hip box that has a little bit of a strange perspective issue. That being said, this looks amazing; good stuff!
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Pau Luna
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Hi, I´ve been drawing for a long time as a side job. Looking for get better and become a professional artist now. This but a sketch, I´ll upload more things for your valuable comments
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winterpencil
I like how expressive the face is, I would watch out for the line quality which seems to be a little bit scratchy, proko has a video on how to correctly hold a pencil, it's worth a watch! Good luck on your art!
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winterpencil
It feels like I'm missing something, maybe contour lines? Anyways, any feedback is appreciated! :)
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Gabriel Banos-Valencia
i feel like there not that good but maybe I’m being too critical any thoughts.
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I feel like there's good solidity and structure. I would try to bend the lines on the boxes and make them more curved when necessary, some of these figures look a bit stiff. But other than that I think that you're doing a good job :D
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winterpencil
This exercise was very tough! Any feedback is appreciated :)
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winterpencil
This is by far the toughest exercise so far in this course for me. Any tips are welcome !
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winterpencil
Some structure drawings, they look a bit sketchy, I need to work on the structure a bit more
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winterpencil
More figure drawings, these are mostly 1 minute gestures, criticism welcome :)
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othmane
I'm farily new to this , any feedback/critiques will be very appreciated.
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winterpencil
I love the movement on these! Personally I would just try to make the lines a bit tidier, the lines on some of these are a bit messy in my opinion. Other than that, keep up the great work :D
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winterpencil
Any suggestions, I'm afraid that I'm not overlapping the spheres correctly in the bean. Critique is welcome, encouraged and highly appreciated !
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Laura Paula
Any suggestions on how can I improve it?
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winterpencil
I think you're on the right track. I would personally try to improve the connection between the two spheres of the bean, I think the drawing would improve a lot with more continuity and gesture between the spheres . Keep up the good work!
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winterpencil
Hello! here are some of my 30 second, 1 minute and 2 minute figure drawings. I feel like there is some sort of secret sauce missing in my drawings but I can't figure out what it is. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated! 😀
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