Hi there, good work on these! In the last two poses, there are a few things I’d like to focus on. 1st pose (last page): the scapula should be rotating upwards rather than sitting in the neutral position. You can see the endpoints where the muscles dip into the skin outlining the trapezius muscle. It’s a little harder to see the bottom end of the scapula because of the teres major that’s covering it, but since the scapula is rotating upward, the bottom end of each scapula should end up closer to the outside of the body. 2nd pose (last page): the gesture in this one is a little stiff. You’ll want to make sure the gesture of the front of the body is arcing a little bit outward rather than collapsing into itself.

As I look at your gestures it does look like your improving, I think looking at 5 and 6 I'm seeing some nice curves around the midsection. I think though you could try to focus on having a little more line efficiency, meaning I can see you sketch over the same area a few times just to get a right when maybe planning and confidently using 1 stroke may help you get a little more clean lines. I'd also say that there's probably a good opportunity to focus on using more S and C curves vs straight lines in the limbs.