LUIS ENRIQUEZ
LUIS ENRIQUEZ
Earth
Alex Dejak
Critiques welcomed, appreciated, and harsh truth encouraged.
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LUIS ENRIQUEZ
your 3 dimensional form for the legs is pretty good. I like that in your last drawing you show the protrusion of the hips on the right side. Overall, you're on the right track. Just keep practicing a ton more . I will also say that the head of your figures are way too large... makes it look like bobble head, but the body itself is good
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Tanren
Hi :) Here are some pictures of my assignements. I used the photos provided by Stan.  So i did a sketch from the reference and then drew an exaggerated version. Most of my sketches are different from the dynamic versions. oh well. Again, sorry for the messiness.
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LUIS ENRIQUEZ
These are really good. I like how the changes for the second pic is slightly altered, but still enough that you were able to create a new pose.
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LUIS ENRIQUEZ
Hi everyone. After watching the critique video, i went back and fixed some issues with my drawings. Still, i notice that i was too excessive with contour lines Please comment and let me know if you see anything that i should be aware of. thanks.
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Aleksandra Krupskaya
Hi all! I'll be grateful for critique. I attempt the poses before watching the examples, and try to figure out the mannequinazation for myself first. I think the limited knowledge of anatomy holds me back: in examples, Stan often draws muscles of the torso and I always feel a bit lost when he does that since witholut knowledge about muscles it's really hard to identify and simplify them. But maybe I'm missing something> Also I'd be grateful for assessment of my proportions - I know sometimes it's hard to see proportional flaws in your own drawings. And any advice is very welcome ;)
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LUIS ENRIQUEZ
Overall, You are in the right track. I Especially like the 3rd drawing on the first row, and i think you nailed it in terms of the perception of 3d form and proper shapes you used. if you're having trouble with anatomy i suggest you revisit prokos video on landmarks and make notes and drawings on musculature. Then have these notes/drawings right beside you when you're making mannequinzation sketches. this method has really helped me a lot and i highly recommend it
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Maria del mar Garcia Sanchez
Hi! This is my first entry on Proko 2.0! All critiques are welcome
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LUIS ENRIQUEZ
This looks very good
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