Rachel Dawn Owens
Richmond, Virginia USA
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Mattia Ferrari
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3d
added comment inCritique - Rhythms
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3d
Great rhythms!
Angelica
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16d
This took a while to get but it is starting to make more sense. Logically I understand that there is a lot of foreshortening going on when we are going from seeing one side to the other when the twist happens but still, when I just look at it... it's really hard to wrap my head around what's going on and draw the intermediate line.
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3d
It’s like a math problem you gotta work out! I like that I can see you working it out through the sketch. Good stuff!
Ethyn
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3d
Twisting forms is so much fun!
In the twisting arrow demo, Marshall placed the three boxes far enough apart so that they don't overlap.
I wanted to see what would happen if you foreshorten a similar setup so that they do overlap. I started ideating for this but then went a bit overboard! Still, it seems like a fun puzzle to return to some time.
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3d
Suoer clean! And nice work shooting for the extra challenge of foreshortening!
Asked for help
Here's my submission.
A couple things to note,
* some of my lines are inconsistent in value.
* The tips from the last video really helped, sketching the overall shape helped me get some of the scale down although I didn't completely get it on the robot girl or hand.
I'd love to get some feedback!
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3d
These look great! The tapered lines look awesome and the forms look more 3d than the reference!
Asked for help
Here's where I'm at... Feedback please? \m/ :)
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3d
Woah. This is a crazy idea for a painting.
Theres a lot of empty space on the sides of the composition. Either make the guy bigger or add more to the environment.
Thumbnail out some different compositions and see which one tells the story you want the best.
I can see progress in just these few days. Getting back into the swing of drawing after a long break.
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3d
Nice work! Really like the second one!
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3d
nice job dividing up the planes. You got the right idea.
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6d
I think the issue here is the reference. It’s a very pretty photo, but the bright white background is causing a lot of reflected light that flattens the image.
Find a reference with a darker background and a single obvious light source.
Maybe even light your own still life using a desk lamp.
Your drawing is really nice and clean. If you want to get the most out of this assignment, try again with a new reference.
Thanks for sharing! Good luck 👍
@bert54
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9d
My first attempt along with other references that I thought would be simple for a level 1. I did cheat on the pinball for proportions. Overall, it's a mixed bag. I do feel good about these after the fact despite knowing that my proportions are off.
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6d
Wow. I like where you went with these. It looks like you understand the concept well 👍
