Kei
Kei
Earth
Aspiring animator and concept artist
Kei
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Hello, I would like to get some critique for the first part of the third assignment before I move on. Thank you all!
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Kei
Hello, everyone! I would like to get some constructive critique before I move to the shading :) Thank you all <З
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lukeng
Tried drawing these from different angles to practice imaginative drawing. Critiques are much appreciated
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Kei
5mo
Hello! In my opinion the male reposting is very well done! As for the female one, I think that you need make adjustments in the foreshortening. The shoulders will look slightly bigger, the legs will look slimmer/smaller the more down they go and the ribcage and the torso will look closer together. I hope that this helps!
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crusmat
Hi, I'm currently practicing mannequinization. I know I have still to work a lot on the line quality but I would like some feedback on the exercise and if this is how I should approach it :) (sorry for the photo quality too)
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Kei
5mo
Hello! These are some good attempts, only I will advice you to remove the lines inside as they take away the attention. Put lines on the places where the bones and the muscles are the most visible in order to give more volume and make it more believable. I hope that this helps!
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