Joseph Morrison
England
Hi am trying to get better with each piece I do helping those behind and learning from those in front thanks.
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Joseph Morrison
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4yr
added comment inProko Challenge Monstober - FINAL SUBMISSIONS HERE
For the Peterson kids and their faithful mutt Tiddles this was the last thing they wanted but only they had been bestowed with the mystical power of the teddy bear. They had overcome many obstacles as they ventured below to the gates of the feared demon prince, now could they defeat this monster and save all children from its evil.
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4yr
Pretty sick man!
Charlene
4yr
Looks epic!
Joseph Morrison
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4yr
Asked for help
Hi everyone this is my first post here, I’ve been working my way through the anatomy course slowly and posting on Facebook, but now will post my progress on here. I’ve had a go at doing a few buckets in space to represent the pelvic region before moving onto drawing the pelvis inside. I wanted to know if anybody can give me any constructive criticism on the perspectives or anything else wrong with the buckets. Thank you Joe.
Hi there Joseph! I want to start out by saying this is super solid work. Considering how hard ellipse perspective already is, this assignment also has the bucket taper, and that added wedge cut out makes this a challenge. That in mind, your first four in particular I see very little perspective errors with, they're really nicely executed.
I want to mention line hierarchy real quick - darker or thicker lines where they're describing the form and lighter, thinner lines for when you're drawing through or working out the perspective. That's just a little presentation note though, I know your main focus is the perspective.
I focused on #6 for perspective crit. The biggest issue I notice with it is that on the plane facing us, the crosshairs aren't quite placed correctly. The bottom edge of that plane is the edge closest to us, so the crosshair should be placed a little back from the halfway point, making it diminish as it goes away. I feel like that's better described in drawing, sorry if it's a bit confusingly worded! On that same plane, I made it a bit thinner, so that it followed the pattern of the farther two ellipses - the furthest one is the most 'open,' the middle one a bit less so, so I made the one closest to us thinner still. If you were going off reference for that one, feel free to post it! I feel like that'd help show what you're working from too.
Again, super solid work! I hope this helps!
