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Marco Sordi
2021/10/5. Hi everyone. Here’s my second attempt for this section. Thanks for any advice or suggestion. Have a good day.
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Happy Bean
If you were to combine what you did here with the first attempt, it would be great... In the first attempt you shaded the arm essentially like a cylinder (i.e. you were thinking about primary forms). In this one, you seem to have forgotten about the primary form, and only considered the secondary forms in isolation. I think Stan once said that when he's shading, he's not shading the primary form first, but he's thinking about the primary form while shading the secondary.
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chekdot
Attempted a digital sketch of Morgan. Please do share your feedback or critiques.
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Happy Bean
I think there are some issues with your structure. Here are a few things I noticed: -The right eye is too big, while the left eye is too small -The eyes don't appear to be looking in the same direction because the ovals of the irises have different proportions. One is much narrower than the other -The eyes, eyebrows, bottom of the nose and mouth are not aligned. They should be fairly parallel. -The right eyebrow seems to merge into a shadow in a way that makes it look too big and misplaced. It also makes her look angry, I think, while in the photo her eyes are very calm
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Marco Sordi
2021/9/3. Hi everyone. Here's my first digital figure ever. Thanks for any advice or suggestion.
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Happy Bean
I think that in the upper body, you're dancing on the edge wrt. light/dark separation. On the legs you have a much clearer separation, which makes everything look much better.
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Happy Bean
The ulna should end at the side of the pinky finger.
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Marco Sordi
2021/9/2. Hi everyone. Here’s my assignment for this chapter. After watching the critiques video I’ll try to make again this example and another one ‘cause I don’t really like how I’ve drawn them. Thanks.
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Happy Bean
Plane changes look very sharp due to lack of tonal gradation from terminator to light.
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Happy Bean
I think adding some dark accents/increasing the value range would enhance it.
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Kensei Tron
Gesture/Shading Study Feedback is appreciated.
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Happy Bean
I'm a little bit confused by the core shadows again. I would try to tone them down and simplify them, and also think a little bit more about the thickness. A thick core shadow reads as a gradual plane change.
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Kensei Tron
Gesture Study If you have a comment let me know! Feedback is appreciated.
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Happy Bean
Second one: Your lines are a bit confusing sometimes, especially around the rib cage arc. Breasts feel too rigid in this pose.
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