I'm not really liking the way this is turning out but I like the idea. Any suggestions? + The guy in the middle doesn't look right.

Hi Only been painting in oil for a few months so I didn't really get a chance to varnish anything. But this painting had some big issues with variable glossiness so I gave retouch varnish a go and I loved it! Feels like its the first time I can actually see all of it without the values going all over the place. Easier to take pictures as well. The only thing is that some dust got stuck to it which is annoying. I have covered it with a sheet of baking paper between each layer and thought that would be enough. Idk, will have to find a more dust free place for varnishing. Anyway, this is a repainted version of an older digital work that I wanted to do in oil from the start. hope you like it!:) C&C welcome:)

Not sure if I'm posting in the right category but think that's it:) Would love to get some critique on these. I feel like the proportions and the anatomy isn't too bad but I just struggle with getting the right likeness. When I have to, I'm usually able to get a reasonable likeness with using a bit of the liquify tool after the sketch is done but I'm trying to learn how to get it without using liquify. Glad to hear any comments:)