I have recently started learning how to write stories as I want to get better at writting so please read it and tell me how was it good or shit please. As I was walking through the squeaking floor felt like someone placed a rough sawdust on the floor and as walking the attic the it was full of cardboard boxes waiting to unleash the devil inside it with ray of sunlight dashing through it with light illuminating the dust  and the room gets darker and darker as I walked through it with squeaking of the floor like rats walking by lhoochuk khuchuuck and the darkness lurking around and then suddenly a calm breeze entered and my leg slightly moved back and amplified the creeking sound and the ropes their got entangled in the legs and then boom i had fallen down and then from corner of the walls a veil of shadow got moving swiftly like strong breeze and then phack phack phack phack it came running towards me and I saw it my eyes were swollen with veins all over the sclera and tears flowing by like rain I got terrified af and then the creature came running and running and somehow I managed to get up and I took steps back and ran ran till my lungs blow out and the creature came running running whilst the darkness hugged all over the room and he was chasing me and I was running from him and then the whole room was like a scary marathon and after while I fall again by the pothole and then the behemoth came towards me and caught me the behemoth was very gooiy like a slime the skin like a elephant with a mixture of sawdust with a liquid spilled all over it and the eyes like bamm bamm big like a big stadium lights splashed open with a red red light coming through it the arms and full body covered with blood ready to engulf me inside him and then suddenly he picked me up and tossed me up in airrr and I screammm aaahhhhhh ahhhhhhh somebody save me save me hail marryyyyyyy god save meeee and then got inside his mouth and limbs in one corner of rooom and other limb in other corner of the room and my blood spilled like a splash and then my chapter was over.