I was sitting at the cabin quietly near the firewood and outside there was a storm going on i could see from inside peeking through the creaking old window blizzard of snow falling down and cracking the ground it was a lot of them but amidst all that fassad I was quietly chilling down and warming my hand on the firewood and then suddenly I could hear a shout I wonder at first what the fuck is that and then I went after that it was my son of a bitch son getting frightened by hearing a errieness sound that faggot got frightened just by listening and my bitch was consoling her that it is just a sound coming off from the wall and it is nothing just a wind nothing more than that so don't be frightened son but he didn't stop getting frightened and then I yelled him don't be a pussy get up and fight what's there but he being a pussy became a pussy so I head outwards to see what the fuck is that so I picked up the axe and went outside and when I went outside i could only see blizzard of snow falling on my moustaches my hairs to my every body part and suddenly I got pooping sensation so I ran towards the cabin but upon reaching there i pooped already and ran towards the bathroom dropping poops along the way and on the other side my pussy son and my bitch was laughing at me and when I came back they saw me and could not stop laughing but seeing them happy melted my heart so I let them smile and the end. Hello everyone the above is a story I had written to practice writing in first person point of view and I am a absolute beginner in writting and my main goal is to do visual storytelling like making comics and oneday I will make comic on the above story I am looking to get feedback on the story so please give it a read