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3yr
Talal Zulfiqar
I want to make use of this platform because Proko put time and effort to get it running. So, i might post more often here, usually for feedbacks and critiques.
I have been painting this imaginary scene in oils for the past month now, on and off, but i would like to share all the snaps of the work at different phases. What do you think of the progress so far? Do you think one phase was better than the other? If so, why? Just honestly any feedback or critique appreciated.
3yr
Hello Talal :),
Personally I find it hard to say as I don't know what was made with purpose and what you wish to improve in your work.
As you were talking about phases I can give you an advice on that. It seems that you are painting Alla Prima. It's a very, very, very hard painting technique. Plus here you are painting from imagination making it even harder.
I always recommend oil painters to follow these steps as they have been used for centuries by the great masters : Drawing on canvas -> One color tonal value ->Painting over with colors + refining.
Each steps can of course be done in several sittings but following this path will help you reducing the complexity at each session.
I do like the painting :)
Hope any of that will help you.
Talal Zulfiqar
3yr
Thank you so much for the feedback!
And you are right, it was done alla prima, and i agree, imaginary alla prima work is very difficult.
I'll keep in mind your recommended workflow and definitel try it, as it seems more logical actually, for imaginary works especially.
Thanks once again!
