Hey ! This is great job again ! I think your line quality helps a lot to make your drawing dynamic ! And your shapes are really well designed ! I especially like the first and the third poses you've drawn. One thing you might need to consider is how you want the eye of the viewer to flow and being aware of the focal point of your drawing. For example, on the first drawing the tail area is very well designed and interesting but I feel it "lock" the eye a little bit as it is the most interesting part (was it in purpose ?) On the 6th drawing, a bit the same, the tail is well designed but I feel it break the global flow of your drawing. I hope it helps ! 😀

Great work ! I feel some of them are falling into the "snowman effect" and a bit symmetrical shape but not all of them. Make sure to keep it in mind for your next session. On the last page, your loosing a bit the line confidence you had on the first two pages. The two first pages are great ! I think you should continue this way ! 👏👏 Feel free to give me your critique on my submission !

This is great job ! The second one is great ! I agree with you with the size of the paper leading to distortion. I think in this case we should use an easel or find a way to draw on a more vertical paper.

Hey ! This is great work again ;) Here are few things I see : - one eye fells smaller than the other - the jaw feels too tilted - and I feel the perspective between features is not consistent. I mean the mouth is leaning to the left, the nose is fairly horizontal and the eyes are almost leaning to the right. This is just some feelings I have by looking at it, you should try checking your drawing by transparence with the reference. Any way, the face is very recognisable ! So I think we can call it a success ! Good job !

Hi 👋 ! I think these are great ! The goal was to explore shapes design and it is exactly what you did ! Some looks better than other but it is the result of a good exploration I guess ;) In every rooster, the complexity of the comb makes a contrast with the overall simplicity of the other shapes which makes these drawing interesting ! But you're right, in regard of this exercise, it could have been simplified more. Great job !

Hi ! This is great job on the shape design ! especially on the eagle, fish, chicken and bears. I feel that you did not simplify enough on the buffalo, red pandas and the hippo. Even if it is not the purpose of the exercise, I think you should try keeping comfident lines. Like during the line exercise maybe searching the lines very lightly and then when you're happy with the design, the proportions and stuff, you can go back with harder lines. It will help you to keep working on line quality without loosing the sence of the current exercise. About the 7 years old's drawing, I think that designing shapes (avoid symmetry, using CSI etc.) and having comfident line makes a huge difference.

You've done a great job ! Espacially with the hippo which felt very difficult to me. I think, for the level 2, you should push your design even more ! "Going wild with shapes" he said ;) Feel free to give your opinion on my submission !

Hi ! Good job ! It is always nice to have fun while drawing, I also found this project very fun. I feel that you're still thinking about the contour instead of basic shapes. It might explain your difficulties with proportions. I think your "triangle buffalo" is on the right track using basic shapes. Feel free to give your critiques about my attempt !

Hi ! This is great work, your shapes are clean and interesting ! You should try the level two assignement ! Feel free to let me know your opinion on my submission.

This is great ! This artwork feels very difficult and you've done an amazing job ! Don't really know what to say ! May be the lines on the arm and on the thigh are a bit less designed and more repetitive on your version but it is not the topic of the assignment I guess. Great job ! 👏 Feel free to give your feedback on my submission !

Hi ! I did not find these sketch from James gurney ! I am jealous, I love his work ! Great job on your study I think ! Especially on the tiger where your lines weight vary a lot (legs close and away from us for example) I feel the pig a little more even on the line weight. The thickness vary but not the value which makes it feel a little less accurate (Is it searching lines overlapping or a heavy line ?). Hope that helps ! Keep going ! Feel free to give me feedback about my submission 🙏