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Mariusz Stefanowski
added comment inProject - Simple Animal Portraits
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Not really sure what I’m doing, cant wait for critique video to clarify more :)
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Thank you for including me in video again @David Colman , exactly after your review of my flatness I've derailed from course, having fun with simple forms in high volumes over simplified human anatomy to get the feel and I'll be back :)
First time in critique video ever ! Thanks for honor and tips, definitely construction with 3d forms is my shortcoming that I try to work out :)
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Starting out, more to come :)
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Reaaally hard for me, but also fun. Will work on it more, first tries below.
Totally not feeling it today, probably i should go back to structure study or memory tomorrow
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Try to focus less on subject on more on clear strokes :) and maybe start with penguin? this crazy lad is not easy :)
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I’m having a hard time with proportions especially with the penguin
That's great, as proportions were not the main part of the this practice and you did great on line practice :)
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Almost didn't post it, because of shame lol.... Well, attempted 3 times at 3 different days with 3 different approaches, but to be honest, I think I have no idea what I'm doing. (need to correct that)
You're a beginner placed in vast ocean of "what we dont know", so any direction to start is great :) I love that actually you've added more character to the penguin that there was in reference. Good job, keep it up :)
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sketching these were fun, but also challenging with proportions and keeping the lines confident. I would love critique on the line quality!
For my beginner eye, shit that's perfect :) All is on point, and where you had a problem there is next line to it that does the job and still looks clean and with purpose. Exactly as Stan prescribed and as bonus great 3d form showed.
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This is so different from drawing on tablet where I use more wrist than my whole arm, and I feel like confident execution requires losing lots of accuracy (at least for me)
Confident line is better than on point scribbly one, but I can imagine that accuracy comes with time. At least me, I've never used whole arm to draw/write and when compared with many year of writing using only fingers it's just lack of experience in it :) like many years gap of experience between two.
