Laura Estrada
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2yr
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Hey there, artists!
I worked on some mannequins this week and I thought I'd share!
For clarity, #1 is from way back when I thought this exercise was gonna be about gesture. Then on #2 you can see things started to change, and then it was just mannequin (attempts) from #3 onwards.
My mannequins are pretty simple for now, but at least I've managed to convey a real sense of movement and depth, or so I believe. :D What do you think? If you could offer some critiques or guidelines for improvement, I'd be very helpful!
Jeffrey Schout
2yr
I think it looks really good. I can see the progress you made.
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2yr
Hello, is there anyone who would like to give some feedback? About number 4, when I look at the drawing I feel that the posture it is facing towards me. I am not sure how to fix that.
3yr
This week I spend time drawing inside behind the computer but also outside. I have to say it was a really nice learning for experience. When you draw people walking, picking something up or sitting on a bench you realise how many movements / positions people can take.
It also helped with not overthinking. So I am glad I started. Below I have added yesterday's sketches wile drawing outside.
Feedback is welcome.
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Second part, please comment and critique. Thanks
Martin
3yr
I think it looks really nice how you where able to draw the story (what the person is doing) with just a few lines,
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@vandortstudio
These are 30 second scetches. I found 30 second is challenging, I was hardly able to finish the drawing.
Feedback from other people is also welcome.
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@vandortstudio Check it out. It turned out alot better with ghosting. I used a lot les lines which makes it less sloppy. It also saves time I think. You take the the time to ghost but you also spend les time drawing lines.
I do have to say for leaning purpose I copied the lines Stan draws.
This is the progress of day 3 following the course. I drew this without whatching Stans drawing. I've noticed there are alot of spaghetti arms and legs. I will work on that tomorrow. Other feedback is more then welcome.
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3yr
Hello! This is my first time doing gesture drawings. The reference pictures are from lineofaction.com. These are 2 minute gesture drawings made after doing 50 or so. I want to make sure I'm on the right track. I'm finding myself run out of time before the 2 minutes are up. I'm using a chalk pen on clip studio paint. Do you prefer learning with pressure sensitivity or not? Do you work traditionally or digitally? Thanks!
3yr
Hi Rika,
I think they look really good! For me it is a inspiration. The only critique I could think of is that the man in the last photo has a big torso/belly when you compare it to the photo.
Thanks for sharing.
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