Likeness is great. Look into cool colours for the shadows. Bottom could have a little bit more work on the form so it looks like you're more angled. Super tempting to add reflections to the eyes, because they look great, but your likeness is so strong I think it distracts from the face (this is subjective though). I did a quick paintover to show you what I mean. Colours https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9YMPI3Dg6i4&ab_channel=BenLustenhouwer Also you're amazing and tell me to bugger off if you think im being rude.

It's spot on. Feelings are hard, it may need a story/scene to help evoke. Its professional standard. How to make it better is subjective and based on the style you're looking to achieve.

Here is my eye assignment, I can’t finde the foto I used, I mite edit this comment if I finde it. Like to hear your coments.

J.C. Leyendecker

The fact that you're asking this question is actually a really good thing. It means that your visual library or sense of what's good has outgrown your ability. Worst thing you can do as a professional is to look at your work and fall in love with it. Seems like you're transitioning out of this phase and as crappy as it feels, every professional goes through it.

Hey guys! I just want to post some of my Bird drawings using spheres, cylinders, and boxes indicated in the lesson. Tell me what you think of them and how could I further improve on these. I highly appreciate your constructive feedback! :)

Tried to get as many references with different shapes and colours to practice colour selection. Created in procreate. Giants causeway I was a little lazy with the shapes. Rhyolid Mountains was the most challenging because of the variability of colour.