First I want to say I am a big fan of the colors and the composition! I think it might be because her left shoulder and her left side of the hip are both raised. I don't remember the term for it, but a pose looks generally more dynamic when the lines of the shoulder and the hips are not parallel to each other, if that makes any sense. Maybe raising the right shoulder and lowering the left one could make it more dynamic. I hope this helps :)

Hey team! Please critique my work. I wanna get better

I really enjoyed this approach! This is my first time here on Proko, so I'm very excited. Any critique would be greatly appreciated!