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Toronto, Canada
Jean-François (Jeff) Durix
I did this 1-point perspective drawing before viewing the video and discovering ellipses are out of scope. I didn’t do a good job at the round table
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Denat
I like this sketch and I like how the picture frames are in perspective. Good attention to detail. That table though is on optical illusion, my friend ;) You'll need to give it another try.
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@drawingdodo
This actually took me quite a long time, around 2-3 hours! I wanted to try something that might look cool, and just went with it. The majority of the time was spent just lining up things to the vanishing point and trying to get good horizontal and vertical lines, which I lacked in the level 1 project. I think the cabinet on the left isn't great, I think the lines converge above the vanishing point, but outside of that I don't notice anything too egregious! Always looking for constructive feedback, and have a nice day!
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Denat
The perspective on the flower pot on the left and the diamond pattern on the rug is off. It distracts a bit from what is otherwise a very nicely composed sketch. The bottom line of the shelf unit also doesn't seem to travel to the vanishing point. All of that is easy to correct. I think you have a great eye for composition and creative design. You just have to dial in the technical elements.
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Denat
My pencils break, almost all the time. I used conte and charcoal of different brands. I use a sharp razor and I'm super careful not to apply too much pressure, and then it just breaks. If doesn't break during sharpening, it will break during sanding. I end up going back to my clutch pencil with graphite. Seems trivial, but it's super frustrating. I don't know if it's because I buy them on amazon and they break during shipping. Any tips are welcome.
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Andrey
For day 13 I drew from life, again. A model of Lamborghini Gallardo that’s been collecting dust on top of a bookshelf and a pencil case with some interesting patterns. Well and yesterday’s attempt at using copics on the drawing I started few days ago.
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Denat
You need to put your basic forms into a proper perspective. Basic understanding of perspective will dramatically improve your drawings. There's all kinds of free content on the internet but I like Ernest Norling's book Perspective Made Easy. Keep up the good work and keep practicing!
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Marco Sordi
2023/2/15. Good morning everybody. Here's a figure drawing I made as assignment for @Patrick Jones's anatomy course, "The Anatomy of Style". Thanks.
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Denat
Looks great!
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Jeff Arsenault
Just finished up assignment 1 level 2.
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Denat
Very nice
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1dad+2kiddos
Decided to go through this adventure as a family activity (dad + 7 yo + 5 yo). Here are our pears. Honestly, I found the exercise to be very difficult. Can't really see all the plane changes, especially on the bright areas while looking at the real pear. Any tips? Some planes I just invented because I assume there is a section of a cone joining with a spherical form in there somewhere.
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Denat
I learned that if you squint, you can perceive the values better. Try it. It’s awesome that you’re doing this with your kids. Keep it up! I find the learning curve is pretty steep. You’ll get there.
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For the record, I’m not a lunatic, I did not actually sharpen my pencils with an axe 😆
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@yuzanyoshida
I hope I understood the assignment. I'm doing everything digital cause I'm broke. I drew this trashcan at work since that's where I was while watching this lesson. I did spend more time on it afterwards though. I have a really hard time drawing anything from imagination, I'm just really good at copying what I see instead of creating my own content. Hopefully I can figure it all out here.
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Denat
Check out Zapata’s Secrets of Shading, here on Proko. It’s a fantastic little course on understanding light and shadow. I did it over the course of a weekend, but feel like I’ll keep coming back to it. It’s full of brilliant insights on how to construct shapes and apply light and shadow from imagination. Have a dictionary on hand, because Zapata’s incredible vocabulary rivals his skill with graphite.
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Melissa Muhs
What are some GOOD charcoal brands? I used to love charcoal in high school and would like to try some.
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Denat
Pencils or sticks? I like General’s sticks. I also used General’s, Derwent and Windsor & Newton charcoal pencils, and surprisingly I like Windsor and Newton the best. That’s just my subjective opinion on a matter that surely is highly subjective 😉
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Denat
Greetings from Canada! Let’s do this!
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Denat
This course really is excellent! As a beginner, I’m so amazed at how these seemingly simple technique progressions have taught me not just to get a feel for the figure quickly, but to direct my hand where I want it to go. I’m very excited about what’s ahead.
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Maayan
Some mannequinization back studies
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Denat
amazing!
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@pmak22
Did my normal, screen cap the references and figure out the forms on my own, then go back and compare to the video using red lines to show the major differences. Overall I think my line quality still needs some work, a few of the mannequins had maybe too many cross lines, but boy am I feeling good about my work overall. I'll come back later this week to post the last references from the video.
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Denat
I think you nailed the poses
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Denat
maybe too much contour? I really struggle with line quality. Never sure how to vary to add dimension and interest
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Denat
Fun exercise. I’ve learned a lot here, and I’m looking forward to building on this
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Thomas Lofving
Some fleshy things.
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Denat
This is very cool!
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Denat
Looking forward to this! I completed the figure drawing fundamentals course, and it made me realize how much fundamentals can improve my skill. I really just got into drawing less than a year ago and Proko has been a wonderful resource.
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Anna Gorny
Here there are some of this weeks robo beans. Critics and comments are aprreciated :)
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Denat
I think these are great and you can really tell the pose/gesture. It seems to me that some of your RBs are probably too long in the waist area. I noticed that in Stan's examples the rib cage and pelvis tends to be closer than in my sketches and that is also what I see in your work above. But, top three from the right look accurate to me.
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Marco Sordi
2022/11/24. Good morning everybody. Here’s my today’s 30 mins warming up exercise. Thanks for any suggestion or comment. Have a good day.
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Denat
These look great, especially the gesture of the middle figure.
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