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@oguncle
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2yr
added comment inProject - Learning to Sketch from Observation
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boy these was hard
julien Gaumet
2yr
Hi ! I agree, it was difficult !
Quite difficult to see as your lines are very light.
I think your line are a bit shaky. Use your shoulder to draw or try to move your pen faster (or both ?)
I feel that your pingouin is on the right track for that ! Good job ! Continue !
Don't hesitate to give me your opinion on my submission :)
You've done a pretty good job of simplifying to CSI curves! I can see that really clearly in the halfway point progress photo of the boots. I think your next step is to work on more confident lines. You've got some hairy lines going on as you construct the right line. I think some of the latest videos on line quality and warmups, as well as the tapered line will help you improve with this as you go.
A small improvement with great return would be to try to take some higher contrast photos of your work. It may be that your pencil lines are quite light. It's a little hard to see things with your current photos.