Matt Abery
added comment inPart 6 - Tentacle Demo 2
2yr
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My attempt after watching part 5 & part 6 and I'm not sure how I feel about it but I could a lot better with adding the finer details but considering I'm working on a small drawing (half a page on A4) I pretty much found it difficult to do the small renders of the drawing. I don't really do imaginative drawings as I mostly draw from reference so this was a new horizon for me.
Off topic but whenever I take a picture of my drawings they seem to make it worse then they are or that might be a reflection of my drawing isn't rendered enough.

nikki112459
2yr
Sir there is nothing wrong with your drawing. Do some more using this technique and it will come like second nature.
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nikki112459
2yr
that is awsome
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2yr
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Hello!
I have made some drawings with the lessons from this course and need some help with criticism/feedback on what I have posted here. What is bad and what is good and so on.
The form on the buttom on drawing: 1, I decided to give myself a challenge with only using one B2 pencil and try to make the most of it in terms of light and shadow contrasts. The other two shapes in drawing: 1 I have used two to maybe four pencils on.
I would also like to say that this course has been fantastic fun to work on. I hope there will be a critique video like the ones in the Proko lessons for this course soon from Steven Zapata.
I also think that he is a very good teacher and a very inspiring artist with a good sense of humor, and am looking forward to see more from him in the future with new courses.
Hope people here can help me. :-)
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2yr
This style is super outside my comfort zone, but I always admire it. Sorry for the poor attempt and also the random subject lol it was just on my desk... first attempt. quick painting. 1hr . CSP