Sura Ghazwan
Sura Ghazwan
Illustrator for storybooks and character design
Rin Siebert
Hello! Thanks for looking at my work, I'd love some critique! I did some figure drawing yesterday too based off of the FORCE method (I saw a video on Proko's Youtube), that's the second picture without any numbers, so that is what I'm working off of. I think I may have carried over too much of that, which leads me to my first question: In 5 and 7 I was trying to use less lines, in the rest I made a lot of lines to build up the darkness of them, which is best to practice at the start? 2nd question: What information should I give here? I'm worried this is not enough information to be able to critique me well. For example, though this time I forgot to time myself, would that be useful information? I think I took a few minutes for each. Thank you! I look forward to going through this course!
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Sura Ghazwan
seems that everything is going well for you in terms of gesture, line of action, and basic anatomy.. it is soothing to look at these practices. well done!
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