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Max Yurin
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2yr
added comment inCritique - Simplify Pear from Observation
Just started drawing. Any critique is welcome!
@aagus
2yr
I really like how you follow the roundness of the fruit with your lines. specially the first one on the left. it feels really dynamic, gives it some energy and makes it feel a little windy.
I think, maybe, you could have simplified the shape and the shading more. less roundness, more planes. sharper and harder transitions between tone. while it may look better i think it strays a bit from the intent of the assignment. Keep it up!